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Talk:Adam DeBus

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Latest comment: 15 years ago by Wizardman in topic GA Review
Good articleAdam DeBus has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
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July 19, 2011Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:27, 18 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:27, 18 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

Here are the issues I found:

  • Boston Braves links to a disambiguation page; having it link to Atlanta Braves is probably the best idea here.
  • "DeBus, a infielder," an infielder
  • "He was then signed by the MLB Pittsburgh Pirates" mlb isn't really needed here since the lead already notes this.

Not much to the article, but there's not going to be since he just played one season in the dead-ball era. I'll put the article on hold for five days and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 03:12, 19 July 2011 (UTC)Reply

I just noticed that the writer was currently inactive, so I took the liberty of making the changes myself since they were minor enough. I'll now pass the article as a GA. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 14:33, 19 July 2011 (UTC)Reply