Talk:Ada Ballin/GA1
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GA Review
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Reviewer: Whiteguru (talk · contribs) 00:52, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
Starts GA Review; the review will follow the same sections of the Article. --Whiteguru (talk) 00:52, 30 March 2021 (UTC)
Observations
[edit]- Reference 20 has a defective link. Change .htm to html
- Reference 23 is a dead link. Archived version found here: https://web.archive.org/web/20190802230343/http://www.ncgsjournal.com/issue41/antonio.htm
- omnium gatherum might be in italics. It is so in the original reference. See MOS:FOREIGNITALIC
- Reference 42 is absolutely brilliant. Suppression of women vis-a-vis medical information.
- My sense is that the category: Category:Deaths by defenestration is inappropriate. The lady fell and was impaled on fencing; she was not thrown out the window.
- I just wonder about this lady, and her laying foundations for modern feminism, and for women to take control of their dress, their bodies, their babies and their health, like this. She was most certainly a torch bearer for women and common sense in her time. Consider. --Whiteguru (talk) 06:01, 2 April 2021 (UTC)
Passed