Talk:Acclarent
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[edit]This article is not an advertisement nor is it a PR piece for the company. It is just a statement of who the comapany is and will be referred to after I edit Balloon Sinuplasty that is a registered trademarked procedure by Acclarent. I wanted to create the company page first prior to editing Balloon Sinuplasty to include more detail as to what it is and that it can be only used as a registered trademarked procedure by physicians trained by Acclarent on Acclarent's specific FDA-approved devices. I have looked at other privately-held companies on Wiki and see that they have not been marked for deletion and are similar in content. Please advise as to why you think this is not relevant or important enough to be on Wiki.
--SinusKnight (talk) 17:04, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
- Phrases like "committed to delivering innovative, safe, and effective technology" sound very like advertising. And all those "TM"s are frowned upon in Wikipedia. Some cleanup along these lines and it mite turn into an acceptable article. . . Rcawsey (talk) 17:22, 5 May 2009 (UTC)
I have made the recommended changes. Can you please remove the "speedy delete"? Thanks.