Talk:44 Bulldog

44 Bulldog was one of the Music good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.

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Date	Process	Result
March 22, 2021	Good article nominee	Listed
April 26, 2021	Articles for deletion	Redirected

Current status: Delisted good article

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GA Review

Latest comment: 5 years ago7 comments2 people in discussion

This review is transcluded from Talk:44 Bulldog/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 17:55, 21 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Good Article review progress box

Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will start this review later today! --K. Peake 17:55, 21 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Infobox and lead

Infobox looks good!
Remove the exact release date of the album and the mention of the record labels; merely add (2020) in brackets after the title instead
"who's real names" → "whose real names"
To avoid the first para being too short, move the opening sentence of the second para to being its last sentence
""44 Bulldog" was originally supposed to go" → "It was originally supposed to be released"
"Pop Smoke's second mixtape" → "Pop Smoke's second mixtape,"
Pipe hard drive to Hard disk drive
The drill sentence should come before the lyrics one
"The lyrics are about" → "The lyrics see"
Remove "enigmatic" and "singed", as these words being used is too much detail for the lead
Pipe synth to Synthesizer
"music critics described the song" → "music critics described "44 Bulldog"" with the pipe
"Pop Smoke's more darker tracks." → "Pop Smoke's darker tracks."
Add info about the chart performance to the lead

Background

"early in his career. The rapper got" → "early in his career, having acquired"
Pipe snares to Snare drum
Wikilink hi-hats
Pipe kicks to Kick drum
"was a lost record." → "was "the lost record"." per the source
"to go on Meet the Woo 2," → "to be released on the mixtape,"
Pipe hard drive to Hard disk drive
"They later got all those things fixed," → "They later got all the complications fixed,"
"no session for it." → "no session for the song."
"They all tried to" → "All of them tried to" to avoid overusing "they" at the start of sentences
mp3 → MP3, with the wikilink (sources don't always use correct stylization)
"who's real names are" → "whose real names are"

Music and lyrics

Remove speech mark at the end of the opening sentence
Pipe synth to Synthesizer
"commented the interpolates" → "The song interpolates" with the pipe, as interpolation is not a matter of opinion
Move the part about Hannah Giorgis commenting to being after the connective in this sentence
Pipe single to Single (music)
Wikilink John Carpenter
"saying it has" → "saying the song has"
Introduce Aron A. as being from HotNewHipHop, plus cut down on the amount quoted directly from him per WP:QUOTEFARM
"stated that Pop Smoke" → "stated that the rapper" to avoid overusage of his name

Release and reception

Introduce Rob Harvilla as being of The Ringer
"Los Angeles Times's August Brown" → "The Los Angeles Times' August Brown"
"regarded it as one of Pop Smoke's" sharpest" → "regarded the song as Pop Smoke's "sharpest"
Geographical order should be used for charts, so place Australia before France and use a comma for separation of the last two positions

Credits and personnel

Good

Charts

Good

References

Copyvio score looks decent at 36.3%
Nice job with the archiving here and there is no issues with the ref layout!

Final comments and verdict

On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 19:58, 21 March 2021 (UTC)Reply
- Thanks a lot for the comments Kyle Peake! The Ultimate Boss (talk) 21:25, 21 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

The Ultimate Boss Kudos to you for the quick response, but you still need to fix certain issues:

Remove the referencing of the record labels in the opening sentence
Change the ""44 Bulldog" was originally supposed to go" part accordingly (see earlier for this and other comments below)
Change the "no session for it" part accordingly

After these are covered, this should be good to go! --K. Peake 21:56, 21 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

Kyle Peake Shit. Fixed them. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 22:48, 21 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

The Ultimate Boss

Pass now, nest job but remember to check everything is done before ticking off! --K. Peake 06:17, 22 March 2021 (UTC)Reply

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