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Latest comment: 24 days ago by Rhubarb414 in topic Services section too market-y?
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Hello,

Thank for you reviewing this draft. I realize paid contributions are a fraught topic. I am affiliated with Thistle Health Inc through a long-time friend who works there, and who has then commissioned me to write this article. I've read the pages on COI, Deceptive Advertising, and "When your boss tells you to edit Wikipedia."

I've done by best to adhere to Wikipedia's guidelines, although I know it is impossible to do so given my COI. My aim was to respect Wikipedia's mission and to mitigate Thistle's marketing influence as much as I could.

Hopefully by submitting a sincere effort to Articles for Creation that it won't be too much of a hassle for an objective editor to bring it up to snuff.

At the least, I hope I've provided enough credible/notable sources for an article to be drafted by someone not me at a later point in time.

Thank you. ~ Rhubarb Rhubarb414 (talk) 16:41, 28 April 2026 (UTC)Reply

Services section too market-y?

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I edited down the Services section in the draft submitted on May 17, 2026. Still wondering if perhaps this sentence "Customers may opt to add sustainably-sourced animal proteins such as poultry or pork." is too market-y. I'm trying to write in-line with published articles from similar companies (i.e., Purple Carrot, HelloFresh, and Blue Apron). It doesn't seem out of line to me, but if it is, perhaps it'd be best to cut the whole Services section. Rhubarb414 (talk) 22:24, 17 May 2026 (UTC)Reply

Did not realize the draft needed to be re-submitted to Articles for Creation until 9/10/26. Rhubarb414 (talk) 00:25, 11 September 2026 (UTC)Reply