Draft talk:Airpaz

Hi wikipedia admin

Please do merged from here https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Airpaz_(2) to here https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Airpaz

thanks admin Jodysetiawan23 (talk) 07:09, 8 January 2025 (UTC)

That's on you to perform. Once you have merged the content, we can combine the histories. - UtherSRG (talk) 12:52, 8 January 2025 (UTC)

I have merged them. I had to leave out some content as they were promotional. Jay 💬 19:33, 8 January 2025 (UTC)

Could anyone give a guide for my article ?

Could any admin give us advice where is the promotion text on my draft? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Jodysetiawan23 (talk • contribs)

One example, the first sentence Airpaz is Asia Pacific's online travel agents (OTA). Really? People in the entire Asia Pacific region have no other online travel agent? This is promotional. Your inability to see this is why editors should not work on their COI subjects. - UtherSRG (talk) 13:05, 15 January 2025 (UTC)

Hi UtherSRG, I have revise the article, could you help to review it ? Your feedback would be greatly appreciated! Jodysetiawan23 (talk) 07:51, 16 January 2025 (UTC)

I see nothing in the article that would pass WP:NORG. - UtherSRG (talk) 12:07, 16 January 2025 (UTC)

I have revise the article, it's ok for now ? Jodysetiawan23 (talk) 04:28, 17 January 2025 (UTC)