Talk:Power & Control/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: (CA)Giacobbe (talk · contribs) 02:35, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

Hey Wiki, I'll be reviewing this! --Giacobbe ^talk 02:35, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

General

• Looks like there's a disambiguation link to correct

•  Done

Lead and infobox

• "Diamandis collaborated with Steve Angello while writing the track" — Just a suggestion, but it may be beneficial to let the reader know he was a member of Swedish House Mafia? Try "Diamandis collaborated with former Swedish House Mafia member Steve Angello while writing the track".

•  Done

• Rest of lead and infobox looks good

Background and composition

• Same thing just about Angello

•  Done

So just fix those little things and this should be an easy pass.--Giacobbe ^talk 02:52, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

Good work, passing!--Giacobbe ^talk 02:44, 9 May 2014 (UTC)

Comment from non-reviewer

"So So Gay" (refs #14 and #18) is not considered a reliable source. I would replace those. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 18:53, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

• Dylan Garner cannot be confirmed with any reliable sources, so that has been removed; I have replaced the citation for the chart position. WikiRedactor (talk) 21:17, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

• Good work with the replacement. If the commercial aspects cannot be expanded beyond an incomplete paragraph, though, I would merge it into another section. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 22:27, 8 May 2014 (UTC)

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